“Enhance strategies for reading, drafting, revising, editing, and self-assessment.”

Some strategized developed to help me edit my writing is to get take all the feedback given from my peers and change whatever needs too. Which I do the same, as I provide feedback that other could use and, in a way, strengthen my revision skills as I try to give feedback that is complementary of their writing and also point out flaws that could be improved on. However, this is made possible through the drafts that we do for every assignment, as drafts do show the flaws of missing components or what needs to be clarified. It has made us more observant readers, when reading we know what is missing in the particular process. For instance, our groups first website was missing components, as this just became a separate website, as it was a bit flawed to continue, so we decided to start over with a new website that way more visually pleasing and more organized. Being able to self-assess ourselves and knowing that we needed to start from scratch as we were missing proper formatting and decided to change the style.

The smart heat – You don’t have to pick between your warmth and your planet. (cuny.edu)

(Figure 1- Draft version of engineering proposal website)

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